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I cannot bare...
...the ever hollow beating of my heart
...the agonizing weeping in my chest
...the throbbing ache within my soul
...the tears that my heart bleeds
It pains me so...
...the yearning for those soft caress
...the longing for those tender kisses
...the hunger for the tightness of those arms
...the wanting for that warm abandon
I do not want...
...this traitor beneath my breast
...this heartach echoing within
...this anguish in my soul
...this affliction in my psyche
To want you still...
...to be near
...to be whole
...to be mine
...to be here
But I cannot deny...
...Its truth.


it's an old poem... back from '07...
I just have to mention this, because it's not completely obvious upon first glance... but the first lines of each "stanza" (even though they are all interconnected), directly flow into each other... in other words... the lines ending with "..." not only continue onto the ones four after it, but can also be read alone, without the four lines between them.

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:iconnejifangirl206:
:wow: wooooooow!! :clap:

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NejiFanGirl206, Akari Tsukiyakari
I totally love Neji. :heart: He's soooo Awseome! Also I am a ninja :ninja: and ninja's are awseome.:ninja: And we are everywhere:ninja: you just don't know it...dun dun duuun
NINJA NINJA NINJA :ninja:
:iconsorceress2000:
:XD: thanks

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NejiTen: So much more than words...
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My quality of writing fluctuates depending on the quality of writing of what I read; for that reason I have to be picky.
:iconmichcat1996:
amazing!

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click [link] if you dare........
Mah Dragon! ~[link]
:iconsorceress2000:
:XD: glad you think so.

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NejiTen: So much more than words...
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My quality of writing fluctuates depending on the quality of writing of what I read; for that reason I have to be picky.
:iconshadow252525:
:clap:

:hug::kiss:

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Boredom is the true mother of invention
Click here I dare you to [link]
:meow: :+fav::ninja: That right I'm a favninja :mwahaha::ninjaplot:
:iconsorceress2000:
:XD: thanks
:iconkissmeeplz:

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NejiTen: So much more than words...
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My quality of writing fluctuates depending on the quality of writing of what I read; for that reason I have to be picky.
:iconsentari-unleashed:
Oh meh gee! *whacks self for oblviousness* :hug: Kami, I'm an idiot for not noticing so were down! I hope so cheer up soon!

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Once you go Yaoi, you never go back! SasuNaru for life!
:iconnejifangirl206:
you're welcome :D

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NejiFanGirl206, Akari Tsukiyakari
I totally love Neji. :heart: He's soooo Awseome! Also I am a ninja :ninja: and ninja's are awseome.:ninja: And we are everywhere:ninja: you just don't know it...dun dun duuun
NINJA NINJA NINJA :ninja:
:iconshadow252525:
*i'll kiss you just can't say where here*

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Boredom is the true mother of invention
Click here I dare you to [link]
:meow: :+fav::ninja: That right I'm a favninja :mwahaha::ninjaplot:

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