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To think without learning by *Sorceress2000:iconSorceress2000:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2009 *Sorceress2000
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I've done and redone this poem for two years now... normally a poem i feel in the moment will fade away and i'll probably not like it months later... but this is one that i just can't seem to get tired to redoing and making better cos i really liked the original, but i always feel like it can be improved even more... this is probably at least the 10th version of this poem... and it's a lot better than the original, but i'm sure 2 years from now, i'll see a bunch of problems in it again, and redo it again... for no though, I like it... 7 out of 10 (which on my rating scale, is VERY high)... the only reason it's not a 9 (i've never given a 10) is because i feel like there's still something missing at the end...

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Mood: Adoration ~Rosepaw14 Apr 10, 2009, 6:08:03 PM
its so good!

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BB: Who wants tofu waffles
Cyborg: No one wants tofu waffles
BB: I do
Cyborg: is there meat in the tofu
BB: Of course theres no meat in the tofu Its Tofu
Cyborg: Then nobody wants it.

So in other words, Kiba is mine, not yours.
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~makemeacullen Apr 10, 2009, 6:08:06 PM
its really deep ^_^ adding to faves as of now

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About a dog:
Dad: she's a cute little thing
Mom: I like her!
Me: *suspicious look* I don't trust her...
Dog: *wags tail with a cute face*
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*Sorceress2000 Apr 10, 2009, 6:08:45 PM
:XD: thanks

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SEPARATE BUT EQUAL IS INHERENTLY UNEQUAL
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*Sorceress2000 Apr 10, 2009, 6:08:54 PM
i saw.. thank you :XD:

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SEPARATE BUT EQUAL IS INHERENTLY UNEQUAL
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:iconrosepaw14:
~Rosepaw14 Apr 10, 2009, 6:09:12 PM
no problem!

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BB: Who wants tofu waffles
Cyborg: No one wants tofu waffles
BB: I do
Cyborg: is there meat in the tofu
BB: Of course theres no meat in the tofu Its Tofu
Cyborg: Then nobody wants it.

So in other words, Kiba is mine, not yours.
:iconmakemeacullen:
~makemeacullen Apr 10, 2009, 6:10:16 PM
:D :iconredbullglompplz:

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About a dog:
Dad: she's a cute little thing
Mom: I like her!
Me: *suspicious look* I don't trust her...
Dog: *wags tail with a cute face*
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~Rikku9314 Apr 10, 2009, 9:02:36 PM
I think it's gorgeous =)

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Who knows; starting a new journey may not be so hard...or maybe...it has already begun.

-Kairi, Kingdom Hearts
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~nejifangirl206 Apr 10, 2009, 9:05:38 PM
It's really good! :D Nice job!

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NejiFanGirl206, Akari Tsukiyakari
I totally love Neji. :heart: He's soooo Awseome! Also I am a ninja :ninja: and ninja's are awseome.:ninja: And we are everywhere:ninja: you just don't know it...dun dun duuun
NINJA NINJA NINJA :ninja:
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*Sorceress2000 Apr 11, 2009, 2:00:24 AM
thank you :XD:

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SEPARATE BUT EQUAL IS INHERENTLY UNEQUAL
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